for Wings Come With Freedom5/27/2004 c1 darkpaladin13
I really liked this, I dunno it just reads well and I suck at reviews so I'll stop, but this is good here.
I really liked this, I dunno it just reads well and I suck at reviews so I'll stop, but this is good here.
5/24/2004 c1 
2Avel
Very nice, kind of creepy, but definitely in he good way, makes it all the more powerful. Nice job.
~avlblu
2AvelVery nice, kind of creepy, but definitely in he good way, makes it all the more powerful. Nice job.
~avlblu
5/17/2004 c1 76CoolBeans18s
Wow.. this poem is so vivid, the imagery of this draws you in, you feel the pain... its brilliant. Very, very well written. I enjoyed reading it!
~ CoolBeans18s
76CoolBeans18sWow.. this poem is so vivid, the imagery of this draws you in, you feel the pain... its brilliant. Very, very well written. I enjoyed reading it!
~ CoolBeans18s
5/17/2004 c1 44Nearly There
Wow! This is really good.
Well done! The imagery is really good and very beautiful.
Good work.
Feel free to check out my work too, I'd appriciate your opinion :D
44Nearly ThereWow! This is really good.
Well done! The imagery is really good and very beautiful.
Good work.
Feel free to check out my work too, I'd appriciate your opinion :D