for Johnny9/23/2005 c1 Kelsey
Good use of personal experience mixed in with imaginary situations! Very truthful and eye-opening to family relationships! Definitely write more!-K.K.
Good use of personal experience mixed in with imaginary situations! Very truthful and eye-opening to family relationships! Definitely write more!-K.K.
7/27/2004 c1 Shannon
the lesson in the story didn't make sence. we all understand that the boys life is not that great.. but it doesn't explain how it got any bettermor anything... the details are great though. and the storyline kept me glued...:0)
the lesson in the story didn't make sence. we all understand that the boys life is not that great.. but it doesn't explain how it got any bettermor anything... the details are great though. and the storyline kept me glued...:0)
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