11/4/2005 c1 PleaseDeleteThisAccountMods
I prefer violence over his kind of stuff but I still thought it was pretty cool.
I prefer violence over his kind of stuff but I still thought it was pretty cool.
1/2/2001 c1 21heart warden II
A little strange, but very good! I liked the first part the best . . . the short, choppy-sounding lines really add to the effect. Nicely done!
A little strange, but very good! I liked the first part the best . . . the short, choppy-sounding lines really add to the effect. Nicely done!
1/2/2001 c1 MilkyWayPen
I like this. It has alot of emotion in it. With just single words, you could feel the emotion in this. Good job. Keep writing!
I like this. It has alot of emotion in it. With just single words, you could feel the emotion in this. Good job. Keep writing!