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8/27/2004 c1 4jemraja
beautiful.. *sniff*
"My only sanctuary / away from the madness / the crisis / the agony / within myself" ahh it flows.. and it paints a grey picture of sinking into yourself to get away from others
not meaning to pry, but are yu hiding from everything around you? reach out if it is :( or i suppose poetry would help... i hope yur life isnt falling apart lyk in yur poem...
this is where alcohol gets yu *preachpreach*...beautiful beautiful end.. within herself\
8/13/2004 c1 2ParmaseanCheese
This is a great poem. i, myself, cant relate to this but my closest friend can. You rhymed perfectly. Continue writing poems. theyre good
5/30/2004 c1 thisuserhasleft
Is this a cry for help, Jessica? I'm there for you! LOL! Anyhoo, write more poems 'cause I think that they are really good! "No more tears" That's the best line! I wonder what Pedro will think...
A rose for you...
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5/17/2004 c1 30Melui
wow. this a very powerful poem. I wonder if it hold any truth to your actual life. Your rhyming scheme fitted in perfectly with what you were trying express. Good poem, and many people can relate.

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