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4/2/2005 c1 ludicrous louie
was that a person...or the clarity of truth? It could be either in my mind...i see it as a little bit of everything leaving...thats great writing...
9/14/2004 c1 7Li'ain
I really liked this poem even more than the last one i reviewed which was written later. I think this would make a great song never mind poem. You really have the hang of imagery I can like see what your talking about. It's just great.
8/9/2004 c1 2RaHo
lovely. =D
5/18/2004 c1 29amazingblazes
Woah. That was really well written! I like the way the last two lines went together, the whole "endless cycle" thing, and then bringing in the first line of the poem. That was great!

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