for All Alone4/2/2005 c1 ludicrous louie
was that a person...or the clarity of truth? It could be either in my mind...i see it as a little bit of everything leaving...thats great writing...
was that a person...or the clarity of truth? It could be either in my mind...i see it as a little bit of everything leaving...thats great writing...
9/14/2004 c1 
7Li'ain
I really liked this poem even more than the last one i reviewed which was written later. I think this would make a great song never mind poem. You really have the hang of imagery I can like see what your talking about. It's just great.
7Li'ainI really liked this poem even more than the last one i reviewed which was written later. I think this would make a great song never mind poem. You really have the hang of imagery I can like see what your talking about. It's just great.
5/18/2004 c1 29amazingblazes
Woah. That was really well written! I like the way the last two lines went together, the whole "endless cycle" thing, and then bringing in the first line of the poem. That was great!
29amazingblazesWoah. That was really well written! I like the way the last two lines went together, the whole "endless cycle" thing, and then bringing in the first line of the poem. That was great!