
6/1/2001 c1
142Battykat
powerful. we allus see the truth when it is too late to do owt about it. thank you :)

powerful. we allus see the truth when it is too late to do owt about it. thank you :)
1/11/2001 c1
12Sensitive Guy
Whoa, i am in shock i understand everything u say but i dont really know what to say. Its a beautiful poem and not as SAPPY as mine :-). But thats ok ive noticed u have a cryptic style with doom in mind. No more ring though ;-), Gavin.

Whoa, i am in shock i understand everything u say but i dont really know what to say. Its a beautiful poem and not as SAPPY as mine :-). But thats ok ive noticed u have a cryptic style with doom in mind. No more ring though ;-), Gavin.
1/2/2001 c1
91unwritten
that last line happens alot. people see the truth when its too late. its a very good poem!

that last line happens alot. people see the truth when its too late. its a very good poem!
1/2/2001 c1
21heart warden II
Awww . . . that's so sad! But it's human nature to lust for the unattainable, huh? And it's too bad, too! Anyway, nice poem, I really liked it! (and, yes, I am a guy . . . ; )

Awww . . . that's so sad! But it's human nature to lust for the unattainable, huh? And it's too bad, too! Anyway, nice poem, I really liked it! (and, yes, I am a guy . . . ; )