for Hit and Run5/26/2004 c1 
3dahommie32992
Hi good story, But i think that u (thats right U) have no right to tell me how to do anythng plus i didn't really mean for it to sound that i owned this girl ok bye
3dahommie32992Hi good story, But i think that u (thats right U) have no right to tell me how to do anythng plus i didn't really mean for it to sound that i owned this girl ok bye
5/21/2004 c1 20My Psychosis
I love this. The only part that doesnt really fit is the second line in the first stanza, "Unsuspected, I didn't hear them say" Unsuspected doesn't fit. Maybe try unsuspecting? Just my opinion. But it's great, really it is.
20My PsychosisI love this. The only part that doesnt really fit is the second line in the first stanza, "Unsuspected, I didn't hear them say" Unsuspected doesn't fit. Maybe try unsuspecting? Just my opinion. But it's great, really it is.