for Wolf boy meets Fat girl7/24/2004 c3 
12MoonDaughter17
Cool chappie. Does this mean that Emily is gonna be a werewolf now? Cause you said that Aaron bit an scratched her. Anyway, update soon please.
12MoonDaughter17Cool chappie. Does this mean that Emily is gonna be a werewolf now? Cause you said that Aaron bit an scratched her. Anyway, update soon please.
7/3/2004 c3 romancingthemoon
Ah, Emmy-words...
This story is witty and very funny and very inside-joke-y, but it's still riddled with bad puncuation and improper capitalization. I swear I will beta for you if you just send me the story. I really think this would make them a lot better.
I hope I'm not offending you. I'm deciding that I'm not because I've said it a million times before.
Well anyways, it's great, except for the...well you get the picture. Lurve you, Em.
Ah, Emmy-words...
This story is witty and very funny and very inside-joke-y, but it's still riddled with bad puncuation and improper capitalization. I swear I will beta for you if you just send me the story. I really think this would make them a lot better.
I hope I'm not offending you. I'm deciding that I'm not because I've said it a million times before.
Well anyways, it's great, except for the...well you get the picture. Lurve you, Em.
6/2/2004 c2 romancingthemoon
Oh, Christ, I'm laughing like a maniac!
"Okay whatever you say Ace", Aaron glowered.
Love the little "Ace" comment in there, for reasons you already know.
"Aaron slammed the door and walked away, mumbling "bitch ass" under his breath, like a sort of mantra."
How true is that?
"...but was cut off by the thud of a roller skate crashing off the hood of Jesse's car and the squeal of tires speeding up to pass."
" "I can't believe you weren't cast for OKLAHOMA!" Jesse sniggered. An awkward silence built between them. Emily hoped it was sexual tension. Jesse hoped someone would kill him and put him out of his misery."
Mother, that's funny. It's all funny because it's all true.
Too bad the other people out there in Fiction Press land don't know that.
Write more! Can't wait to read, despite the grammatical errors. You'd better hope Mrs. Bregman-now-or-soon-will-be-Commender doesn't read this.
Oh, Christ, I'm laughing like a maniac!
"Okay whatever you say Ace", Aaron glowered.
Love the little "Ace" comment in there, for reasons you already know.
"Aaron slammed the door and walked away, mumbling "bitch ass" under his breath, like a sort of mantra."
How true is that?
"...but was cut off by the thud of a roller skate crashing off the hood of Jesse's car and the squeal of tires speeding up to pass."
" "I can't believe you weren't cast for OKLAHOMA!" Jesse sniggered. An awkward silence built between them. Emily hoped it was sexual tension. Jesse hoped someone would kill him and put him out of his misery."
Mother, that's funny. It's all funny because it's all true.
Too bad the other people out there in Fiction Press land don't know that.
Write more! Can't wait to read, despite the grammatical errors. You'd better hope Mrs. Bregman-now-or-soon-will-be-Commender doesn't read this.
6/2/2004 c1 romancingthemoon
Wow, Em. You never cease to amaze me.
But I've read these parts, so maybe you do. I obviously didn't do my job as a beta properly. There's a few things technical things wrong but other than that it's a good story so far.
Progressing to the next chapter,
Caro
Wow, Em. You never cease to amaze me.
But I've read these parts, so maybe you do. I obviously didn't do my job as a beta properly. There's a few things technical things wrong but other than that it's a good story so far.
Progressing to the next chapter,
Caro
6/1/2004 c2 MoonDaughter17
Cool story so far. It's really good. Just a little advice, I think it would be best to remake the title. It's a little weird. Well, anyway, update soon please. ^.^
*Soul of Eternity*
Cool story so far. It's really good. Just a little advice, I think it would be best to remake the title. It's a little weird. Well, anyway, update soon please. ^.^
*Soul of Eternity*
5/24/2004 c1 Greeneyes616
oo sounds intersting...I like the descriptions, keep up the good work:)
~Greeneyes616
oo sounds intersting...I like the descriptions, keep up the good work:)
~Greeneyes616
5/21/2004 c1 1shyXshortieXbabe
hey the summary for this story was really enrapturing. I'd love to read more, the chapter was interesting.More please!
1shyXshortieXbabehey the summary for this story was really enrapturing. I'd love to read more, the chapter was interesting.More please!
5/21/2004 c1 GoodbyeDeleteThisPage
This so made my day! Aaron, a warewolf? That is so funny in a "I can almost see it" sort of way. Ah, Aaron dreams are the best! Come on write some more soon. I really really like it so far! Even your discriptions of Jesse are expert. I expecially liked the line, "Jesse had wrapped his arm around his girlfriend like he was supposed to" That a perfect discription and I notice how something like that seems so alien for Jesse to do.
Great.
-Porter
This so made my day! Aaron, a warewolf? That is so funny in a "I can almost see it" sort of way. Ah, Aaron dreams are the best! Come on write some more soon. I really really like it so far! Even your discriptions of Jesse are expert. I expecially liked the line, "Jesse had wrapped his arm around his girlfriend like he was supposed to" That a perfect discription and I notice how something like that seems so alien for Jesse to do.
Great.
-Porter