11/22/2004 c1 Alicia
For one-shots like this, you probably shouldn't include a huge outer plot. Like, "We're kidnapped and missing," is way more interesting than a kid falling in love. It would be a better exercise in writng just to have a self-contained plot, not something that could be a tiny footnote in a larger story about a kidnapping... well, you get what I mean. I hope :)
For one-shots like this, you probably shouldn't include a huge outer plot. Like, "We're kidnapped and missing," is way more interesting than a kid falling in love. It would be a better exercise in writng just to have a self-contained plot, not something that could be a tiny footnote in a larger story about a kidnapping... well, you get what I mean. I hope :)
5/21/2004 c1 evilcleo
very nice
very nice
5/21/2004 c1 cutiepie008
I hope that's not the end cus that was... weird
I hope that's not the end cus that was... weird