for The Cryptic Doll5/24/2004 c2 Audrey Baxter
Oh! Poor doggie!
He he... a girl just fainted, and I'm worried about the dog. That's me.
I'm confused about how there are dancers, but I'm in a hurry so I kinda skimmed this. Other than my low attention span, this is really good (even though my attention span isn't your fault).
Please let the doggie be OK!
Oh! Poor doggie!
He he... a girl just fainted, and I'm worried about the dog. That's me.
I'm confused about how there are dancers, but I'm in a hurry so I kinda skimmed this. Other than my low attention span, this is really good (even though my attention span isn't your fault).
Please let the doggie be OK!
5/23/2004 c2 Barbe
Please Tell me Tri gets magic? I'm thinking something on the line CalBrena you're doing?
Please Tell me Tri gets magic? I'm thinking something on the line CalBrena you're doing?
5/23/2004 c2 Angelic Hellraiser
Please tell me there will be some sexual tension b/w Sade and Trinity!CONTINUE!
Please tell me there will be some sexual tension b/w Sade and Trinity!CONTINUE!
5/22/2004 c1 
2Hearts Goddess
It seems interesting! Kind of strange and it sounds like the movie Chuckie sort of! Update soon! Kendal
2Hearts GoddessIt seems interesting! Kind of strange and it sounds like the movie Chuckie sort of! Update soon! Kendal
5/22/2004 c1 9Love and Shadow
nice start. i really like it. Tri seems a bit strange though, ^^
~*~L&S
9Love and Shadownice start. i really like it. Tri seems a bit strange though, ^^
~*~L&S
5/21/2004 c1 1J'Adore Les Phoques
Sweet! I like the start. Trinity seems... odd. I like that you made that apparent in her character, though. I really supery dupery hope you continue. Bleh.
1J'Adore Les PhoquesSweet! I like the start. Trinity seems... odd. I like that you made that apparent in her character, though. I really supery dupery hope you continue. Bleh.