for The Cryptic Doll1/19/2007 c13 exclamatorypoint
Oh fack. :| I was suspecting that ending since last chapter, but it was still freaky. Good shit, though. Good plot, good ending.
But I still think it would be tons better if you made it longer, showing how Sade and Trinity's relationship develops in the House of Dolls. Two months is way too long a time to just skip when you're writing a story like this and you're in that part: when a relationship just began to unfold.
Oh fack. :| I was suspecting that ending since last chapter, but it was still freaky. Good shit, though. Good plot, good ending.
But I still think it would be tons better if you made it longer, showing how Sade and Trinity's relationship develops in the House of Dolls. Two months is way too long a time to just skip when you're writing a story like this and you're in that part: when a relationship just began to unfold.
1/19/2007 c10 exclamatorypoint
I'm sorry, but the story is progressing way too fast for my liking. The plot is there, and so is your writing talent; it's the plot that lacks structure and support to make it more convincing.
I'm sorry, but the story is progressing way too fast for my liking. The plot is there, and so is your writing talent; it's the plot that lacks structure and support to make it more convincing.
6/23/2006 c13 
2seraphim-rush
What the crap. So creepy. x_X But I liked it nonetheless! I'm gonna have to beg my mom to burn or sell or do something with all these porcelain dolls in the house. xD
2seraphim-rushWhat the crap. So creepy. x_X But I liked it nonetheless! I'm gonna have to beg my mom to burn or sell or do something with all these porcelain dolls in the house. xD
6/23/2006 c12 seraphim-rush
Ah noes, Emily's back! x_X That was kinda cute, with the masquerading thingy. ^_^
Ah noes, Emily's back! x_X That was kinda cute, with the masquerading thingy. ^_^
6/23/2006 c1 seraphim-rush
Gah, porcelain dolls creep the living dickens out of me! Unfortunately, my mom is a big fan of antiques and a few years ago she had this huge fetish with collecting antique porcelain dolls and now our house is FILLED with these creepy dolls in their shelves in the hallways and in some rooms. ~_~ So creepy.
Gah, porcelain dolls creep the living dickens out of me! Unfortunately, my mom is a big fan of antiques and a few years ago she had this huge fetish with collecting antique porcelain dolls and now our house is FILLED with these creepy dolls in their shelves in the hallways and in some rooms. ~_~ So creepy.