for The Cryptic Doll2/23/2006 c13 
18flights.of.fantasy
i loved the story.. till the end.rather erm hopeless? all those depth and such.
haha but great work still.
18flights.of.fantasyi loved the story.. till the end.rather erm hopeless? all those depth and such.
haha but great work still.
2/2/2006 c2 owlish
Just started reading and I think its quite intriguing. I always thought dolls were scary!
Just started reading and I think its quite intriguing. I always thought dolls were scary!
1/28/2006 c13 Angela
it's nice and all but it lacks the depth that you always place in your characters. You could have made the ending scarier too.
it's nice and all but it lacks the depth that you always place in your characters. You could have made the ending scarier too.
12/28/2005 c1 13WindWing
the story is great but i wish the ending was different...i was engrossed all the way. loved it completely
(:(:(: Peace Out :):):)
13WindWingthe story is great but i wish the ending was different...i was engrossed all the way. loved it completely
(:(:(: Peace Out :):):)
12/16/2005 c13 Wanahagaloogi
Will there be an alternated ending?I think this ending's a bit...weird?I loved the story but just a teeny bit sad about the ending
Will there be an alternated ending?I think this ending's a bit...weird?I loved the story but just a teeny bit sad about the ending
12/9/2005 c13 2Paper.Eskimo.Boots
Ok, this is weird. I'm dissapointed at the ending...but I love it too much to be too dissapointed. I wish it were longer. Very good, I felt like I was seeing everything happen. I do, however, think you should've developed the characters a bit more because I couldn't quite grasp their personalities really. :3
2Paper.Eskimo.BootsOk, this is weird. I'm dissapointed at the ending...but I love it too much to be too dissapointed. I wish it were longer. Very good, I felt like I was seeing everything happen. I do, however, think you should've developed the characters a bit more because I couldn't quite grasp their personalities really. :3
10/28/2005 c13 5aqua-angel
Gosh, I love your writing style. You do a very good job of introducing a new world to your audience. The twist totally caught me off-guard. I actually don't read horrors that much... I don't really like them but your stories are really good, I can't seem to help myself. They really chill me to the bone =S Once again, great work!
5aqua-angelGosh, I love your writing style. You do a very good job of introducing a new world to your audience. The twist totally caught me off-guard. I actually don't read horrors that much... I don't really like them but your stories are really good, I can't seem to help myself. They really chill me to the bone =S Once again, great work!
9/20/2005 c13 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
NO CRAP! WOW! SHOCKING ENDING! NOT AT ALL WHAT I EXPECTED! Nice job. You're really an incredible writer, you know that? Really good job! UPDATE INTERRAGAME SOON! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
NO CRAP! WOW! SHOCKING ENDING! NOT AT ALL WHAT I EXPECTED! Nice job. You're really an incredible writer, you know that? Really good job! UPDATE INTERRAGAME SOON! PLEASE?
Luv ya,Tashi :)
9/3/2005 c1 1Mlle. Verity
Lovely ending. Oddness permeated this from beginning to end while providing cohesion to what would otherwise be utterly absurd assumptions - such as Emily's existance. Excellent writing, I'll be keeping an eye on you.
1Mlle. VerityLovely ending. Oddness permeated this from beginning to end while providing cohesion to what would otherwise be utterly absurd assumptions - such as Emily's existance. Excellent writing, I'll be keeping an eye on you.
8/28/2005 c13 Flower-in-the-Night
God ur story's are addictive! ive bin so addicted to ur story's that i even 4get to review! RIts creepy how Sade has bin turned into a porcelain doll and now wants Trinity!
God ur story's are addictive! ive bin so addicted to ur story's that i even 4get to review! RIts creepy how Sade has bin turned into a porcelain doll and now wants Trinity!
8/16/2005 c13 Camisado
Whoa... what the- what? I get it, don't worry i'm not that slow, i get it, it's just well... wild. lol... damn the unhappy ending which leaves lots of space for my mind to run free and crazy. lol
This was great, i love all of your stories.
Whoa... what the- what? I get it, don't worry i'm not that slow, i get it, it's just well... wild. lol... damn the unhappy ending which leaves lots of space for my mind to run free and crazy. lol
This was great, i love all of your stories.
7/26/2005 c13 Kythia
*tears* Aw, I actually thought that, just once, I would get a happy ending out of you. But, of course, that was not possible. *sniff*
Well, It was a good story. I can't say much for your mental stability (tehehe) but I can say something for your writing skills and ideas. Congradulations on another great story.
*tears* Aw, I actually thought that, just once, I would get a happy ending out of you. But, of course, that was not possible. *sniff*
Well, It was a good story. I can't say much for your mental stability (tehehe) but I can say something for your writing skills and ideas. Congradulations on another great story.
7/26/2005 c3 Kythia
Oh boy, this is not helping my fear of porcelin dolls. However, your writing is so addicting that I just have to go on...
*hits the [ ] button*
Oh boy, this is not helping my fear of porcelin dolls. However, your writing is so addicting that I just have to go on...
*hits the [ ] button*
7/25/2005 c6 4Nightmare Of Eden
w00t me loves! xD Hehe...I wonder what Trinity's gonna do him while he's unconcious? O_o I can think of a FEW things *laughs evilly* anyways, this rocks, I love it. Go you. Yea.
4Nightmare Of Edenw00t me loves! xD Hehe...I wonder what Trinity's gonna do him while he's unconcious? O_o I can think of a FEW things *laughs evilly* anyways, this rocks, I love it. Go you. Yea.
7/24/2005 c13 40Death Princess
ok...creepy. that is so weird and bizarre. and 2 think i actually liked sade 2. that sucks. *sigh*
40Death Princessok...creepy. that is so weird and bizarre. and 2 think i actually liked sade 2. that sucks. *sigh*