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17the mouse that roared
Wow. You're going through a lot of junk. I like the fourth stanza especially. I think if you elaborated on the poem more with examples and clarified parts, it would be more powerful. Good job though.
17the mouse that roaredWow. You're going through a lot of junk. I like the fourth stanza especially. I think if you elaborated on the poem more with examples and clarified parts, it would be more powerful. Good job though.