for Brother5/22/2004 c1 
72Earthbound Angel 49
Your poem is really sweet and touching. My little brother and i have a close relationship thats very similar so i guess i can connect with your words. Nice work
72Earthbound Angel 49Your poem is really sweet and touching. My little brother and i have a close relationship thats very similar so i guess i can connect with your words. Nice work
5/22/2004 c1 32bakaneko817
This is a very beautiful poem. I have an older brother to whom I am very, very close. He makes me feel like that too, but unfortunately he is not the type to let me physically collapse in his arms just yet. maybe when we're older though... I really do like your poem and you articulate the feelings very well. I hope you and your brother remain that close forever!
32bakaneko817This is a very beautiful poem. I have an older brother to whom I am very, very close. He makes me feel like that too, but unfortunately he is not the type to let me physically collapse in his arms just yet. maybe when we're older though... I really do like your poem and you articulate the feelings very well. I hope you and your brother remain that close forever!
5/22/2004 c1 2ImmenseBloom
Nice poem. Really touching. It has a lot of emotions. Keep submitting great poems
2ImmenseBloomNice poem. Really touching. It has a lot of emotions. Keep submitting great poems