for His Phenomenal Eyes1/5/2012 c1 darknessdragon2213
Based on the summary alone I thought this story was going to have a tragic ending. I’m usually not one for stories that have song lyrics in them. I often end up skimming the whole story in those cases because they aren’t important if I read them or not. But I really enjoyed how the lyrics you made up actually mattered in the progression of the story. It really helped build up the tension. It was especially chilling when Elic had left on the note “Figure it Out.” I admit I had no idea that Elic would end up being the last person Kara had slept with while she was drunk. But just as I was readying myself for one of those cliché admiring-from-afar endings that always end up tragic, Elic pulls the whole “I don’t want to lose you again!” Cue me going into a fangirly spasm. I’m such a sucker for happy endings! I’m glad you choose to end it this way instead of having them remain as strangers!
Based on the summary alone I thought this story was going to have a tragic ending. I’m usually not one for stories that have song lyrics in them. I often end up skimming the whole story in those cases because they aren’t important if I read them or not. But I really enjoyed how the lyrics you made up actually mattered in the progression of the story. It really helped build up the tension. It was especially chilling when Elic had left on the note “Figure it Out.” I admit I had no idea that Elic would end up being the last person Kara had slept with while she was drunk. But just as I was readying myself for one of those cliché admiring-from-afar endings that always end up tragic, Elic pulls the whole “I don’t want to lose you again!” Cue me going into a fangirly spasm. I’m such a sucker for happy endings! I’m glad you choose to end it this way instead of having them remain as strangers!
11/24/2010 c1 A
Mn, I don't like seeing this kind of thing at all. Especially when the person in question is a relatively good writer themselves. I suppose you can probably guess what I'm about to say next based on that last line: it's pretty obvious.
You've been plagiarized. And I'm assuming you're the victim based on the dates of publish.
Here's the address if you're interested: /s/2501185/1/Where_Will_I_Meet_You
Anyway, sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but thanks for the read in any case.
- A.
Mn, I don't like seeing this kind of thing at all. Especially when the person in question is a relatively good writer themselves. I suppose you can probably guess what I'm about to say next based on that last line: it's pretty obvious.
You've been plagiarized. And I'm assuming you're the victim based on the dates of publish.
Here's the address if you're interested: /s/2501185/1/Where_Will_I_Meet_You
Anyway, sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but thanks for the read in any case.
- A.
5/25/2009 c1 ME
OMG what the hell! WHO IS HE? I am gong to DIE if i dont knwo who ths is! I NEED to know! I mean it. Tel me. tell me! tell me! tell me! tell me!
OMG what the hell! WHO IS HE? I am gong to DIE if i dont knwo who ths is! I NEED to know! I mean it. Tel me. tell me! tell me! tell me! tell me!
4/24/2009 c1 klutz.for.life
Oh. My. God. That was fantastic; I am shocked utterly and completely speechless. I loved the tension mixed with thoughts and the song's lyrics! Keep up the good work. :D
Oh. My. God. That was fantastic; I am shocked utterly and completely speechless. I loved the tension mixed with thoughts and the song's lyrics! Keep up the good work. :D
3/2/2009 c1 silver shaft
wow that was amazing. i KNEW he knew her, especially when he looked at her...wasn't sure what was gonna happen, but i liked the ending.
wow that was amazing. i KNEW he knew her, especially when he looked at her...wasn't sure what was gonna happen, but i liked the ending.
2/21/2009 c1 atragichero
Wow, that was really good!
Wow, that was really good!
2/17/2009 c1 Alicia
wow...that was amazing! i should've seen that coming but i soo didn't! soo cute!
wow...that was amazing! i should've seen that coming but i soo didn't! soo cute!
2/9/2009 c1 Vicky A
All I can say is "aww", it almost made me cry.
All I can say is "aww", it almost made me cry.
1/30/2009 c1 
1LoveAndLife
I love this story. I just spent the last ten or so minutes looking for it because I just joined, after many years of putting it off, and I just had to put it on my favorites. Love, love it!
1LoveAndLifeI love this story. I just spent the last ten or so minutes looking for it because I just joined, after many years of putting it off, and I just had to put it on my favorites. Love, love it!