for Shadows5/30/2004 c1 
17Ruarc
Depressing much?
But still good- three-line stanzas are weird most of the time, but they work mostly here. Good job.
17RuarcDepressing much?
But still good- three-line stanzas are weird most of the time, but they work mostly here. Good job.
5/25/2004 c1 Aimee Raven
Wow! Very dark, deep,mysterious. It's somehow powerful and I like the way you wrote it, the formatting and the choice of words. Nice job! Love, Mia
Wow! Very dark, deep,mysterious. It's somehow powerful and I like the way you wrote it, the formatting and the choice of words. Nice job! Love, Mia
5/24/2004 c1 Tatsu-Dreamer
This makes me wonder if you have ever read about Plato's Cave. Eithter way. Very good. Again it flows naturally. Very nice.
This makes me wonder if you have ever read about Plato's Cave. Eithter way. Very good. Again it flows naturally. Very nice.
5/23/2004 c1 13lostontheroof
This is beautiful! I love the imagry and the word choice. You're awesome!
13lostontheroofThis is beautiful! I love the imagry and the word choice. You're awesome!