for Tin Soldier6/15/2004 c1 
1Jimmy Jazz
Ah, another mastpiece. Fantastic work. Your way of writing is superb - a poet like you gives me no doubts that you shall one day be published - if you wish to do so, that is - and why deny the world that pleasure? Amazing work.
1Jimmy JazzAh, another mastpiece. Fantastic work. Your way of writing is superb - a poet like you gives me no doubts that you shall one day be published - if you wish to do so, that is - and why deny the world that pleasure? Amazing work.
6/3/2004 c1 20Once in a blue moon
Very nice sentiment in here. Just as a side note, the meter was a little bit erratic, but the message got through none-the-less.
I'm writing this (on the by-and-by) because you reviewed one of my poems a while ago. Thank you very much! It took me a while to get back because I haven't been on recently... but thanks anyway!
Nice poems you've got here. ^_^
20Once in a blue moonVery nice sentiment in here. Just as a side note, the meter was a little bit erratic, but the message got through none-the-less.
I'm writing this (on the by-and-by) because you reviewed one of my poems a while ago. Thank you very much! It took me a while to get back because I haven't been on recently... but thanks anyway!
Nice poems you've got here. ^_^
5/25/2004 c1 Aimee Rave
Hey this is so sad! Beautiful...a sort of slow, gentle poem, melancholic but beautiful! I liked it a lot! Wonderful imagery and very sad...I'm sorry for..Samuel being away and I hope he'll come back to you soon. Marvellous poem! Love, Mia
Hey this is so sad! Beautiful...a sort of slow, gentle poem, melancholic but beautiful! I liked it a lot! Wonderful imagery and very sad...I'm sorry for..Samuel being away and I hope he'll come back to you soon. Marvellous poem! Love, Mia