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8/22/2004 c1 37negligible fictional force
i admire you.
this is great.
7/5/2004 c1 13Artificial Refuge
this is incredible. I usually pick my favourite line on reviews like this, but for your poem I don't have a favourite! This is absolutely amazing.
5/23/2004 c1 5Tearstain
Amazing and very beautiful.
5/23/2004 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
Wow, it's absolutely beautiful! The imagery is just, WOW! I love it!
I know this seems annoying but I'm just going to say it, you spelt lunges (lungs) wrong, but not that it matters. This is just so, what's a word, elegant I suppose. I mean I haven't found a poem like this in a while. It's great!
P.S I'd be honored if you checked out some of my stuff.
5/23/2004 c1 53destinee ariarti
WOW...this is amazing. I can't even find anything to criticize here..very nice work, your words are SO powerful..amazing..^.^

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