for For Whom the Story is Told8/26/2006 c1 
24Limited Edition
The jumps in time are rather unsmooth. The plot is...well okay XD Your writing skills are good and there are quite some nice details. Good job!
24Limited EditionThe jumps in time are rather unsmooth. The plot is...well okay XD Your writing skills are good and there are quite some nice details. Good job!
5/27/2004 c1 shadowedskies
ooh! I liked this! The begininning gave me a bit of a jump but it made it even more likeable hehe
ooh! I liked this! The begininning gave me a bit of a jump but it made it even more likeable hehe
5/25/2004 c1 linkin
interesting storyline so far, keep up the good work, will be looking for next chapter
interesting storyline so far, keep up the good work, will be looking for next chapter
5/23/2004 c1 CW-nerd-12
Wow... that's... explicit. At least you're a guy. I know waay too many girls that write this sort of stuff, and you can tell it's just a horny little girl that's written it. Update soon!
Wow... that's... explicit. At least you're a guy. I know waay too many girls that write this sort of stuff, and you can tell it's just a horny little girl that's written it. Update soon!