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9/14/2004 c1 2MIY23
Wow. Beautifuly written!
I like your desription of the inside feelings. The questions are well put.
Keep up the wonderful work!
6/25/2004 c1 22MagenDavid
WOW!
I agree with both of the previous reviews but want to add to them.
This poem screams "plea" just like D said. It gives you the sense of someone trapped in a room yet has contact with their trapper. It sounds like they're begging him to expand their borders, to set them free.
AMAZING POEM!
5/25/2004 c1 49Amanad
Confusing, cryptic, yet painfully clear. I like it.
5/24/2004 c1 37Sunflower Philosophy
The title is absolutely perfect. If I read this poem without the title that's the first word that would come to mind.
What's more, I really do understand this, and you know I do, so why am I even saying so?
A beautiful, honest thing... the most beautiful things in this world are the most simple, and this is a simple plea for understanding.
Just wow.
m~* Sunflower, anyone?

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