for Rapier's Song12/1/2004 c1 Aleara Conlin
The fifth verse is my favorite. It's all really good. great writing. I wish I could hear the music to it.
The fifth verse is my favorite. It's all really good. great writing. I wish I could hear the music to it.
8/1/2004 c1 Ephemeral Seraphim
That's very eloquent from Rapier. So beautiful and lyrical. Anything else much to say? Keep up the good writing. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
That's very eloquent from Rapier. So beautiful and lyrical. Anything else much to say? Keep up the good writing. Hasta luego.
chibichocobo
7/31/2004 c1 teoh
its a beautifully romantic song! he speaks so ... well i dunno how to describe it, but i really liked it
its a beautifully romantic song! he speaks so ... well i dunno how to describe it, but i really liked it
7/25/2004 c1 xmagnoliawine
Sistah,
Why do you say it's sappy? It's beautifully written. It's very good. If you say is sappy, I'll chase you with my sledgehammer.
Rainbow Cloud - Hong Yun
Sistah,
Why do you say it's sappy? It's beautifully written. It's very good. If you say is sappy, I'll chase you with my sledgehammer.
Rainbow Cloud - Hong Yun
7/22/2004 c1 
3Charon-dragon
I think it fits Rapier nicely! ^^
ps. there are more chapters to my stories
3Charon-dragonI think it fits Rapier nicely! ^^
ps. there are more chapters to my stories
7/16/2004 c1 Andrea
Great! Sappy yes! But good. I liked it. In a few words it explains alot about life and all.
Great! Sappy yes! But good. I liked it. In a few words it explains alot about life and all.
5/25/2004 c1 4Seashah
I liked it. But I kind of believe that it's a bit selfish of Rapier. I know that may sound REALLY weird, but it's how I feel. He needs to just learn to adapt, to go on with life. There are other ways to see than with your eyes.
But as I said before, I liked it. It was definately true to character and made a whole lot of sense.
4SeashahI liked it. But I kind of believe that it's a bit selfish of Rapier. I know that may sound REALLY weird, but it's how I feel. He needs to just learn to adapt, to go on with life. There are other ways to see than with your eyes.
But as I said before, I liked it. It was definately true to character and made a whole lot of sense.
5/24/2004 c1 9Ms.Julia
Hey, plz update your story soon ^_^ *puppy dog eyes* I wanna know what'll happen next.. The song was well written reminded me of that Shania Twain song.. From this moment on, lol I could picture him singing this to the same rhythim... Well, hopefully Rapier'll regain his sight! Talk to you in my next review, Your Pal,
Julie
9Ms.JuliaHey, plz update your story soon ^_^ *puppy dog eyes* I wanna know what'll happen next.. The song was well written reminded me of that Shania Twain song.. From this moment on, lol I could picture him singing this to the same rhythim... Well, hopefully Rapier'll regain his sight! Talk to you in my next review, Your Pal,
Julie