for The Barrel of a Gun6/13/2004 c1 
12Saharian
Awe, sad poem. I love the message you are giving with it but it is sad nonetheless. The last two lines are my favourites, "If you don't want it,
You don't deserve it." I agree to a certain degree. If a person does not want to live then no they do not deserve it. But if they have a good reason that they don't want to live, take away that reason and maybe they will change their minds. Or maybe I am just insane...I dunno you pick. Good poem,
Saharian
12SaharianAwe, sad poem. I love the message you are giving with it but it is sad nonetheless. The last two lines are my favourites, "If you don't want it,
You don't deserve it." I agree to a certain degree. If a person does not want to live then no they do not deserve it. But if they have a good reason that they don't want to live, take away that reason and maybe they will change their minds. Or maybe I am just insane...I dunno you pick. Good poem,
Saharian
5/24/2004 c1 simpleplan13
I like it.. very creepy, but powerful
I like it.. very creepy, but powerful