for Garbage and City Lights2/22/2005 c1 
7fivecardcharlie
Wow. I loved this. I don't really read much angst, but the shout out to 'Heart of Darkness' in the summary got me. I was blown away. Though it's dry in terms of dialogue, your writing is incredibly beautiful (I'm a fan of prose). I enjoy all of your work posted, but this one has to be my favorite. You have me on the edge of my seat! Please write some more. And if you ever need a beta...look me up.
-Sarah
7fivecardcharlieWow. I loved this. I don't really read much angst, but the shout out to 'Heart of Darkness' in the summary got me. I was blown away. Though it's dry in terms of dialogue, your writing is incredibly beautiful (I'm a fan of prose). I enjoy all of your work posted, but this one has to be my favorite. You have me on the edge of my seat! Please write some more. And if you ever need a beta...look me up.
-Sarah
5/25/2004 c1 silla-babi
u probably want to separate into smaller paragraphs and maybe add some dialogue...it'll make it more interesting! overall i managed to finish reading it...great work! :)
u probably want to separate into smaller paragraphs and maybe add some dialogue...it'll make it more interesting! overall i managed to finish reading it...great work! :)