for The Tale of the Disgruntled Assistant8/21/2004 c1 
22vidalia.tortuga.88
while the whole stupid detective/smart assistant isnt exactly a new idea, i like where the story is going so far. the title alone makes me wonder just what this disgruntled assistant is going to do to retaliate. i just hope the mystery will be somewhat intriguing.
22vidalia.tortuga.88while the whole stupid detective/smart assistant isnt exactly a new idea, i like where the story is going so far. the title alone makes me wonder just what this disgruntled assistant is going to do to retaliate. i just hope the mystery will be somewhat intriguing.
5/25/2004 c1 2tsee missi
Your story is really good so far! I got a little confused at who Alex was, but I've catched on ;), good stuff, keep it up! And your summary is very catching/ appealing :)
2tsee missiYour story is really good so far! I got a little confused at who Alex was, but I've catched on ;), good stuff, keep it up! And your summary is very catching/ appealing :)