
8/6/2005 c2 Kamama Wyatt
I really enjoyed reading your story. I hope you continue with it-it's the perfect mix of comedy and drama. Your character is witty and intelligent, and extremely likeable. Keep it up!
I really enjoyed reading your story. I hope you continue with it-it's the perfect mix of comedy and drama. Your character is witty and intelligent, and extremely likeable. Keep it up!
5/25/2004 c1
5Ticcies
Wow, I was not expecting the baby thing. This is really well-written. It reads the way a girl her age would think, and I'm assuming that was your aim. I like the beginning, and how everything is all nauseatingly perfect, and then it turns out her life is anything but. Although I feel bad for the poor girl. It sucks to have a mother like that. Mothers... *insert eye rolling*

Wow, I was not expecting the baby thing. This is really well-written. It reads the way a girl her age would think, and I'm assuming that was your aim. I like the beginning, and how everything is all nauseatingly perfect, and then it turns out her life is anything but. Although I feel bad for the poor girl. It sucks to have a mother like that. Mothers... *insert eye rolling*