
4/2/2005 c1
22First Lady
I love it! The way the lines are broken in irregular places... and the imagery... and the thought of chairs being impersonal. I especially like the way that little "perhaps" all on its own on one line introduces the metaphors.

I love it! The way the lines are broken in irregular places... and the imagery... and the thought of chairs being impersonal. I especially like the way that little "perhaps" all on its own on one line introduces the metaphors.
8/30/2004 c1
30a e i o u and sometimes y
Aw ^^
"Perhaps
A piano key that is struck too quickly and catches the audience"
That part especially caught my attention. It added a little bit of spice to the poem. Great, great, great.

Aw ^^
"Perhaps
A piano key that is struck too quickly and catches the audience"
That part especially caught my attention. It added a little bit of spice to the poem. Great, great, great.