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4/2/2005 c1 22First Lady
I love it! The way the lines are broken in irregular places... and the imagery... and the thought of chairs being impersonal. I especially like the way that little "perhaps" all on its own on one line introduces the metaphors.
8/30/2004 c1 30a e i o u and sometimes y
Aw ^^
"Perhaps
A piano key that is struck too quickly and catches the audience"
That part especially caught my attention. It added a little bit of spice to the poem. Great, great, great.
5/25/2004 c1 116Incubabe
Aw... cutesy lovey stuff... aw...
"Perhaps
A piano key that is struck too quickly and catches the audience"
It's always the piano and I love it!

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