for so the sky rises2/9/2005 c1 
1insertterriblypoeticlinehere
Bootiful. You are so going on my favorites list.
Anyway, to add more substance: I love your style, your structure. it really adds to the poetry. The last line closes it up quite nicely, with the perfect feeling. The italics work very nicely throughout the poem. But I will say, that the message is kind of...murky. You get a definate feeling from it, and it's wonderful, but I cant quite see what it's saying. Maybe another read. Anyway, great job again!
1insertterriblypoeticlinehereBootiful. You are so going on my favorites list.
Anyway, to add more substance: I love your style, your structure. it really adds to the poetry. The last line closes it up quite nicely, with the perfect feeling. The italics work very nicely throughout the poem. But I will say, that the message is kind of...murky. You get a definate feeling from it, and it's wonderful, but I cant quite see what it's saying. Maybe another read. Anyway, great job again!
8/25/2004 c1 ylem
You seem to have this thing about spherical rooms with no windows. & you make me feel much inferior in comparison. To close your eyes & lose Europe...that is just too marvelous & beautiful & wonderful & insertadjectiveshere for words.
You seem to have this thing about spherical rooms with no windows. & you make me feel much inferior in comparison. To close your eyes & lose Europe...that is just too marvelous & beautiful & wonderful & insertadjectiveshere for words.
5/30/2004 c1 32EveryNowAndThen
Simply amazing. I wish there was more to say but I'm lacking the words.
32EveryNowAndThenSimply amazing. I wish there was more to say but I'm lacking the words.
5/25/2004 c1 44superfufu
something that taps my interest needs my commendment.
nice job. it made me smile.
44superfufusomething that taps my interest needs my commendment.
nice job. it made me smile.
5/25/2004 c1 116Incubabe
Ah... the last line. So beautiful.
And nicely arranged as well, fp usually hates structured poems but nicely done! *mwah*
116IncubabeAh... the last line. So beautiful.
And nicely arranged as well, fp usually hates structured poems but nicely done! *mwah*
5/24/2004 c1 58floorcollision
excellent- very articulate... yet vague. this pulls on my heart!
really, thanks for writing!
58floorcollisionexcellent- very articulate... yet vague. this pulls on my heart!
really, thanks for writing!