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5/16/2009 c1 2Zoe Marhassa
That. Was. Awesome.
2/9/2005 c1 1insertterriblypoeticlinehere
Wow. I really like your style, not the typical stanzas, or even free verse, it seems. The sudden change of structure was nice, interesting. 'as if he’d hesitate to crush them and hear bone against bone.' I liked this very much. I must go and read more...
10/20/2004 c1 do not resuscitate
so stream of thought and beautiful. this was so original and wow. i absolutely love it.
8/5/2004 c1 3Another Pseudonym
nice piece. i like the intertwining of the girl's discription with the guy's thought processes.
6/10/2004 c1 70this is britt
your style- it's so great. It's so ingenious.
5/25/2004 c1 116Incubabe
Weird and beautiful and so, so you.

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