
2/9/2005 c1
1insertterriblypoeticlinehere
Wow. I really like your style, not the typical stanzas, or even free verse, it seems. The sudden change of structure was nice, interesting. 'as if he’d hesitate to crush them and hear bone against bone.' I liked this very much. I must go and read more...

Wow. I really like your style, not the typical stanzas, or even free verse, it seems. The sudden change of structure was nice, interesting. 'as if he’d hesitate to crush them and hear bone against bone.' I liked this very much. I must go and read more...
10/20/2004 c1 do not resuscitate
so stream of thought and beautiful. this was so original and wow. i absolutely love it.
so stream of thought and beautiful. this was so original and wow. i absolutely love it.
8/5/2004 c1
3Another Pseudonym
nice piece. i like the intertwining of the girl's discription with the guy's thought processes.

nice piece. i like the intertwining of the girl's discription with the guy's thought processes.