for A Rose by Any Other Name Still Has Thorns12/12/2005 c5 DeathAngelCreo
Things are going to be real tough for Vincent from now on, aren't they?As for updating, I don't mind if it takes a little while; I just like knowing that the story is going to continue, I guess. By the way, in the third paragraph, 'coffin' is spelled 'coggin' twice.
Things are going to be real tough for Vincent from now on, aren't they?As for updating, I don't mind if it takes a little while; I just like knowing that the story is going to continue, I guess. By the way, in the third paragraph, 'coffin' is spelled 'coggin' twice.
12/7/2005 c4 DeathAngelCreo
I've been looking for good stories(I have high, sometimes strange, standards...) and from the first chapter this one caught my eye. ^_^ Please continue!
I've been looking for good stories(I have high, sometimes strange, standards...) and from the first chapter this one caught my eye. ^_^ Please continue!
12/3/2005 c1 Starbrat
Hm. I'm not too fond of rape as a plot device. Is it really necessary, or is it just an excuse for mooshy comfort and eventual healing!sex (tm). If so, skip it, and find a better way to get your characters together. Also, it's not very realistic. C'mon, Will's not going to fight back? Even if he's completely overpowered by this teacher, he's still going to struggle. He didn't think to call for help? Also, all he has to do is to threaten to report the teacher and he'd back off. So much as an innapropriate touch could get a teacher fired, rape'd have him in jail.
Hm. I'm not too fond of rape as a plot device. Is it really necessary, or is it just an excuse for mooshy comfort and eventual healing!sex (tm). If so, skip it, and find a better way to get your characters together. Also, it's not very realistic. C'mon, Will's not going to fight back? Even if he's completely overpowered by this teacher, he's still going to struggle. He didn't think to call for help? Also, all he has to do is to threaten to report the teacher and he'd back off. So much as an innapropriate touch could get a teacher fired, rape'd have him in jail.
4/19/2005 c6 
4jladotcom
I really like this one too! There's not much for me to say... I'll probably think of something later when it will be least important, but there's nothing I can do about that.
4jladotcomI really like this one too! There's not much for me to say... I'll probably think of something later when it will be least important, but there's nothing I can do about that.
2/21/2005 c6 4Kaikeyi
O.o please update this fic. I've really fallen in love with your charcters esspecially Venatio, his character is so intriging and it seems like theres so much you could do with him (O.o that sounded a little wrong ^.^)The rp this came from must have been really interessting! I'd have loved to have read it. (eek im suppoed to be writing an essay for english that's due in tomorrow...oh well) anywayz please, please PLEASE update soon, because i honestly love where your going with this fic, and vampires are just so yummy! ^_^ love, [Kai]
4KaikeyiO.o please update this fic. I've really fallen in love with your charcters esspecially Venatio, his character is so intriging and it seems like theres so much you could do with him (O.o that sounded a little wrong ^.^)The rp this came from must have been really interessting! I'd have loved to have read it. (eek im suppoed to be writing an essay for english that's due in tomorrow...oh well) anywayz please, please PLEASE update soon, because i honestly love where your going with this fic, and vampires are just so yummy! ^_^ love, [Kai]
2/11/2005 c6 7Nightmare Wolf
Heh, you're right about the Anne Rice thing. Since so many people know her characters, it is hard to make certain characters. :P And Louis did bitch a lot in IwtV. That's why I liked the end of the movie. -=cough=- I'll be waiting for an update. The question thing was a good idea,though, that'd have taken a lot of space in a chapter.
7Nightmare WolfHeh, you're right about the Anne Rice thing. Since so many people know her characters, it is hard to make certain characters. :P And Louis did bitch a lot in IwtV. That's why I liked the end of the movie. -=cough=- I'll be waiting for an update. The question thing was a good idea,though, that'd have taken a lot of space in a chapter.
12/29/2004 c4 2rousseau
I really love this story, it's so wonderfully written. But why did you toss in vampires? It was going so well! It seemed very strange as there was no previous mention of vampires, and then suddenly one has kidnapped Vincent, turned him, and he has killed Will, and now Will has gone demented. It seems very out of place in an otherwise fairly normal, very romantic, and moving story.
2rousseauI really love this story, it's so wonderfully written. But why did you toss in vampires? It was going so well! It seemed very strange as there was no previous mention of vampires, and then suddenly one has kidnapped Vincent, turned him, and he has killed Will, and now Will has gone demented. It seems very out of place in an otherwise fairly normal, very romantic, and moving story.
12/28/2004 c5 7Nightmare Wolf
This gives me a vague sense of an Anne Rice book. Feh, Will strikes me a bit like Claudia, and Vincent like Louis in the fact that he's so much more innocent in vampiric ways than Will. Eh, I hpe you get what I'm saying. I have an odd liking for Luciel,though. Even if he does seem like an ass.
7Nightmare WolfThis gives me a vague sense of an Anne Rice book. Feh, Will strikes me a bit like Claudia, and Vincent like Louis in the fact that he's so much more innocent in vampiric ways than Will. Eh, I hpe you get what I'm saying. I have an odd liking for Luciel,though. Even if he does seem like an ass.
12/28/2004 c4 Nightmare Wolf
Dude...That was fucked. Gah. -=distress=- If this doesn't have a happy ending, I'm gonig to have to...er...hunt you down and keep you as a pet. . Like Venatio did to Vinny. Fah, I don't have the balls to do that. Literally. -=snicekrs=- Are we gonna see more Venatio?
Dude...That was fucked. Gah. -=distress=- If this doesn't have a happy ending, I'm gonig to have to...er...hunt you down and keep you as a pet. . Like Venatio did to Vinny. Fah, I don't have the balls to do that. Literally. -=snicekrs=- Are we gonna see more Venatio?
12/28/2004 c5 1A Griff of Many Colours
Wah! ^_^ Luciel seems nice (for a bastard XD). Good work! ;_; I hope you can find the pages again.
1A Griff of Many ColoursWah! ^_^ Luciel seems nice (for a bastard XD). Good work! ;_; I hope you can find the pages again.
12/26/2004 c3 2Ree
I'm going to STAB YOU IN THE EYE. Not really, because I understand that you had to do that, but... *mega-pout* That was ... not happy. It makes my heart ache. No wonder you wanted me to upload something happy. Man, you need to... update this really fast so happy things can happen. I feel so sorry for both of them. That girl needs to just... bash their heads together and lock them in a closet for a few hours. Maybe then they'd figure things out. Or maybe they'd need a few DAYS... But at any rate, I really love this sorry, and I'm really sorry it took me so long to review. ^_^ Please udpate again soon!
2ReeI'm going to STAB YOU IN THE EYE. Not really, because I understand that you had to do that, but... *mega-pout* That was ... not happy. It makes my heart ache. No wonder you wanted me to upload something happy. Man, you need to... update this really fast so happy things can happen. I feel so sorry for both of them. That girl needs to just... bash their heads together and lock them in a closet for a few hours. Maybe then they'd figure things out. Or maybe they'd need a few DAYS... But at any rate, I really love this sorry, and I'm really sorry it took me so long to review. ^_^ Please udpate again soon!