for Pain12/26/2004 c1 Ivriniel
I can really relate. I like the last line, when I read this poem for the first time I didn't expect another line but as I was finished I thought of it again and again, haunting inside my head so that I just had to read the poem again.
I can really relate. I like the last line, when I read this poem for the first time I didn't expect another line but as I was finished I thought of it again and again, haunting inside my head so that I just had to read the poem again.
5/27/2004 c1 
19Despair Embodied
loved it. great stuff. love the end lines. really emotive, put me in the picture. keep writing
-Despair
19Despair Embodiedloved it. great stuff. love the end lines. really emotive, put me in the picture. keep writing
-Despair