for Jump Point1/7/2006 c1 
25Master Chief
Really awesome short, kinda reminds me of that scene from Drop Zone with Wesley Snipes. Not much else to say, but really good. There were a few minor errors but none that derail things too much.
M.C.
25Master ChiefReally awesome short, kinda reminds me of that scene from Drop Zone with Wesley Snipes. Not much else to say, but really good. There were a few minor errors but none that derail things too much.
M.C.
9/20/2005 c1 40T41N7
That was really short, but I liked it a lot. That was a very captivating story. You did a great job writing this, and I can't really think of anything you could have added to it to make it longer. You're a very talented writer, keep it up!
40T41N7That was really short, but I liked it a lot. That was a very captivating story. You did a great job writing this, and I can't really think of anything you could have added to it to make it longer. You're a very talented writer, keep it up!
8/19/2004 c1 14biminator
interesting, I suppose. there wasn't all that much to it really. i was okay, however.
14biminatorinteresting, I suppose. there wasn't all that much to it really. i was okay, however.