for Running Away5/26/2004 c1 
7Shadow of Silver
I really like this poem. Like you said, a little repetitive on the A part, but I really like it. Anyway, I really can feel the message that you're getting out through this poem. Very thought out and flowing. Although, I think you should've broken the poem into two stanzas. It doesn't really matter that much, but whatever. Nice poem.
[~Shadow of Silver~]
7Shadow of SilverI really like this poem. Like you said, a little repetitive on the A part, but I really like it. Anyway, I really can feel the message that you're getting out through this poem. Very thought out and flowing. Although, I think you should've broken the poem into two stanzas. It doesn't really matter that much, but whatever. Nice poem.
[~Shadow of Silver~]
5/25/2004 c1 13arwen-evenstar89
I feel like this every day of the week! At least, everyday i'm not at my cottage which is two weeks out of every year! I love this poem!
13arwen-evenstar89I feel like this every day of the week! At least, everyday i'm not at my cottage which is two weeks out of every year! I love this poem!