for The dark room3/27/2006 c1 
2Asterisk Black
This is really good. I don't usually read poetry but I liked this one a lot, I guess because it's something I can relate to.
2Asterisk BlackThis is really good. I don't usually read poetry but I liked this one a lot, I guess because it's something I can relate to.
11/14/2005 c1 4Veronica-D
This is really good too! I think people don't realize that they are their worst enimies... I know I've had to fight against myself.. I found out though I couldn't do it on my own.
4Veronica-DThis is really good too! I think people don't realize that they are their worst enimies... I know I've had to fight against myself.. I found out though I couldn't do it on my own.
11/10/2005 c1 katie
hey! loved this one i really cant wait 4 u 2 upload ur story so hurry up miss muray! lol so ne way bk 2 da poem, tis really gd i like the others 2 but this one is the best especially the ending - who it is - me! hehehe : ) so ne way keep writing n i hope u like mine! lol the guys in it r so cute n sweet lol. x x x
hey! loved this one i really cant wait 4 u 2 upload ur story so hurry up miss muray! lol so ne way bk 2 da poem, tis really gd i like the others 2 but this one is the best especially the ending - who it is - me! hehehe : ) so ne way keep writing n i hope u like mine! lol the guys in it r so cute n sweet lol. x x x
5/26/2004 c1 WarriorHeart
Yikes! Sike, I get it... You wrote this poem very well and it was creative. Keep up the good work!
Yikes! Sike, I get it... You wrote this poem very well and it was creative. Keep up the good work!