for Desert of Rain1/15/2005 c1 
13arwen-evenstar89
I love it! The rhyme and rhythm are awesome. . . It's so true too- great job!
~Lauren
13arwen-evenstar89I love it! The rhyme and rhythm are awesome. . . It's so true too- great job!
~Lauren
6/16/2004 c1 7Shadow of Silver
I've started a simple rating system in my reviews. 9 out of 10. Great job! Your poems are always wonderful and I hope they always will be. This poem sounds alot like Everlasts' "What It's Like"..I would give a few lines of it, but I don't remember the song well. Once again, great poem!
[~Shadow of Silver~]
7Shadow of SilverI've started a simple rating system in my reviews. 9 out of 10. Great job! Your poems are always wonderful and I hope they always will be. This poem sounds alot like Everlasts' "What It's Like"..I would give a few lines of it, but I don't remember the song well. Once again, great poem!
[~Shadow of Silver~]
6/6/2004 c1 22Scarlett Rose Assassin
So short, yet oh so pretty. I LOVE IT! ::puts on favorites::
~SRA
22Scarlett Rose AssassinSo short, yet oh so pretty. I LOVE IT! ::puts on favorites::
~SRA
5/29/2004 c1 trey m
wow. that's...whoa...i can't even explain it. awesome work!
wow. that's...whoa...i can't even explain it. awesome work!
5/26/2004 c1 Roberta Pryce Robinson
I would love to show you, but they are only in my heart, and mind and soul! Just as I know your's are in yours! Good Write! Goddess Bless!
I would love to show you, but they are only in my heart, and mind and soul! Just as I know your's are in yours! Good Write! Goddess Bless!
5/26/2004 c1 292Fabian Cortez
Excellent Metre and wonderful wording. Moving and yet uncommercial and not indulgent or sentimental.
Excellent!
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
292Fabian CortezExcellent Metre and wonderful wording. Moving and yet uncommercial and not indulgent or sentimental.
Excellent!
KEEP WRITING!
F.C