for Obsidian Tears4/28/2017 c2 Guest
My favorite out of the three poems was Homecoming it was so...how to put this it was very SOULFUL yea that's it! Your poem is right up their with my favorite poem The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe I think I like yours a lot more than his of course it just might be a tie to. Well anyways I hope you right more poems can't wait to read more!
My favorite out of the three poems was Homecoming it was so...how to put this it was very SOULFUL yea that's it! Your poem is right up their with my favorite poem The Raven by Edgar Allen Poe I think I like yours a lot more than his of course it just might be a tie to. Well anyways I hope you right more poems can't wait to read more!
4/26/2017 c3 Guest
I liked your poems
I liked your poems
3/15/2005 c3 
4Ari-fm-yk
I'm not a poet critic let's say I am better at reading stories. But really good. I like the Haiku!
4Ari-fm-ykI'm not a poet critic let's say I am better at reading stories. But really good. I like the Haiku!
7/16/2004 c1 11Mystical notes
Wow, I really like how the last line of each stanza was really punched out, the flow was great, and the concepts morbid but beautiful. Great stuff
tata
11Mystical notesWow, I really like how the last line of each stanza was really punched out, the flow was great, and the concepts morbid but beautiful. Great stuff
tata
6/11/2004 c1 5Punkerella
I like the calm feeling I got from reading the poem.
Vivid imagery throughout,especially the final two lines.
5PunkerellaI like the calm feeling I got from reading the poem.
Vivid imagery throughout,especially the final two lines.