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for I Am Man

6/14/2004 c1 13DarkSkaners
Uhm... it's pretty vivid, gotta give you that. I never really liked that sort of poetry, mostly because it can be understood in many ways, unless you know the exact meaning, but I'm guessing that this is about standing out, being yourself and not just think or do what others do, just because they do it (but then again, I could be mistaken)
I have two things I want to ask you though. What does the word "idiocracy" mean? I tried looking it up, but I couldn't find it. I'm guessing that it has something to do with being an idiot/ignoramus, but I don't know.
The other thing is, in one of the first verses, you write "is this", but if you do that, shouldn't you leave a question mark in the end, instead of a period/dot? Or maybe "relocate" the word "is" from it's current position and write it after the word "death"

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