5/31/2004 c1 174marshbar960
this poem is very sad...it's a shame how parents, although they mean very well, overprotect their children and literally cut off their wings which, in the end, the children become distant, immature, and naive! i loved how your portrayed your emotions and used the repitition to create your mood. thanks for sharing and please keep writing!
p.s. you may wish to check out my poems "all the world is a stage", "selfish", and "unknowledgeable" when you get the chance...thanking you in advance!