for The Apocalypse5/28/2004 c1 
15Amaya Windsong
very nice...very nice...i've written poems about the apocalypse too, ("Too Late" "A Vision"...) it's bound to come, might as well be ready, right? good job! XD
|Rikku|
15Amaya Windsongvery nice...very nice...i've written poems about the apocalypse too, ("Too Late" "A Vision"...) it's bound to come, might as well be ready, right? good job! XD
|Rikku|
5/28/2004 c1 144Infinite Smiles
I like that you made "apocalypse" that last word. It ends the poem with finality, which fits the topic like a glove.
144Infinite SmilesI like that you made "apocalypse" that last word. It ends the poem with finality, which fits the topic like a glove.