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10/15/2005 c1 7truth is subjective
"Until death has won," neat phrase ^^
10/1/2005 c1 12FlawedSerenity
I love the rhyming pattern. Brilliantly written!Awesome, original idea for a poem, too. Congrats.Thanks for the review, I really appreciated it. :)
2/18/2005 c1 13aquamoon222
Very nice description of a memorie! This is really brilliant! Very sad.
7/17/2004 c1 40singingspeechless
wow...this is kindof sad and morbid but it's not a badly structured poem at all...
7/3/2004 c1 368EWindheim
Wow, I really like this. I always had the idea that when you die, you don't really die until you are forgotten. You showed that idea beautifully in this piece. Don't be afraid to move beyond rhyming. Even so, you're work is a joy to read. Keep it up.
6/21/2004 c1 9Happy-Platipus
This is very good! It makes you think. Are you talking about God?
Even if you aren't I think that it can be that too.
I like the way you are stating the hypocrisy of the person you are talking to.
Very good!
6/14/2004 c1 3Pont
You're good at describing intangible things. Wonderfully done!
6/13/2004 c1 laerai
A nice personification. Good rhyme scheme. Flows a bit oddly at times. I like the reference to death... it makes me think though... memories... surely they will live on in the other people who experienced them? Eventually dying out though.
6/9/2004 c1 40Kaliella
Hey this is neat! Good job!
6/8/2004 c1 b-chan2007
I liked this poem very much! I liked how you did the opposits and I liked the whole poem in general! Keep up the good work!
6/5/2004 c1 20Elbereth141
Hi! Thank you SOO much for reviewing my poem, it is my first fictionpress review EVER! So i thought i would return the favour. This would make a great riddle, but you put the answer in the name. It's great! I love riddles. Like in the hobbit. LOTR RULES!
Great poem.
6/1/2004 c1 11midnight dreams
Wow. That was really good. =) I love the balance of opposite things. Great job! XD
It's true, too. Really nice. -applauds-
5/31/2004 c1 catseyeview
nice collection of words that sprinkle the imagery of memories.
5/31/2004 c1 42Pineapple Dreams
thanks for reviewing my stuff. i've been learning japanese for 1 year and i think its ery hard lol. but fun, i love the kanji! anyhoo, i LOVDE this poem, it is touching!

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