for Crimson Rainfall4/27/2005 c1 Valentino Gray
S'cyre L. -
Sorry! I thought "Crimson Rainfall" was your name... I appologize! *Bows with my face in the dirt*
- V. Gray
S'cyre L. -
Sorry! I thought "Crimson Rainfall" was your name... I appologize! *Bows with my face in the dirt*
- V. Gray
4/27/2005 c2 Valentino Gray
C. Rainfall -
Hey nice piece... though I have no freakin' clue on what it's supposed be about, but keep me posted when you update. Feel free to look at my work. Peace -n- Much luv.
- V. Gray
P.S. - I've seen you on Raiju's Reviews section. So had to check out your work.
C. Rainfall -
Hey nice piece... though I have no freakin' clue on what it's supposed be about, but keep me posted when you update. Feel free to look at my work. Peace -n- Much luv.
- V. Gray
P.S. - I've seen you on Raiju's Reviews section. So had to check out your work.
12/30/2004 c2 
6Lee Ortega
It's a bit confusing, but still beautifully written. I can't wait for the next chapter to come. ((by the way, I FINALLY got the fourth chapter of Shadowed uploaded))
6Lee OrtegaIt's a bit confusing, but still beautifully written. I can't wait for the next chapter to come. ((by the way, I FINALLY got the fourth chapter of Shadowed uploaded))
7/12/2004 c2 CrimsonEnchantress
You're absolutely right. It doesn't make any sense. That's not necessarily a bad thing, though. It keeps us guessing, and interested.
I probably said this in my last review, but AWESOME DESCRIPTION! It's vivid, and vivid is good. There's also a really mysterious, evil, foreboding atmosphere you create, and it's really effective.
I like how you had the twins psychically connected: it adds so much more to the potential plot of the story. It's awesome, really. (Awesome is my current favourite word) Great job! Update soon.
By the way, I updated my story too. Review?
You're absolutely right. It doesn't make any sense. That's not necessarily a bad thing, though. It keeps us guessing, and interested.
I probably said this in my last review, but AWESOME DESCRIPTION! It's vivid, and vivid is good. There's also a really mysterious, evil, foreboding atmosphere you create, and it's really effective.
I like how you had the twins psychically connected: it adds so much more to the potential plot of the story. It's awesome, really. (Awesome is my current favourite word) Great job! Update soon.
By the way, I updated my story too. Review?
7/5/2004 c2 Yume Silvershadow
Yeah, second chapter! So far so good n_n about the last lines, 'fic?' umm...story? it is orginal,isnt it? Go 'the master'!
Yeah, second chapter! So far so good n_n about the last lines, 'fic?' umm...story? it is orginal,isnt it? Go 'the master'!
6/29/2004 c2 Ffuffy
Little confusing at first, but very well writen. Interesting concept. Bow down before the darkness... ^_^
Later,
~Ffuffy~
Little confusing at first, but very well writen. Interesting concept. Bow down before the darkness... ^_^
Later,
~Ffuffy~
6/27/2004 c1 Riyuji.Raicho
Uy! Shadow Phoenix! How morbid of you... yet interesting rin yung story mo... Wahaha! Your turn to read my fic. n_n
Uy! Shadow Phoenix! How morbid of you... yet interesting rin yung story mo... Wahaha! Your turn to read my fic. n_n
6/6/2004 c1 CrimsonEnchantress
scary, scary...im going to get nightmares!
great atmosphere you've created here, and this has amazing potential for so many ideas. its intense, and well, 'wow'. bloody too...im kind of a non gory person, but its a great start to what im sure will be a great story!
(and, well, i was wondering if you could review my story 'Enchantment'?)
scary, scary...im going to get nightmares!
great atmosphere you've created here, and this has amazing potential for so many ideas. its intense, and well, 'wow'. bloody too...im kind of a non gory person, but its a great start to what im sure will be a great story!
(and, well, i was wondering if you could review my story 'Enchantment'?)
6/4/2004 c1 Mina Carlisle
Well, there is going to be more right? This was so good, and so...vivid, is that the right word for it? Yeah, yeah vivid is good. I want to know more, what happens, eh? Oh and thanks for the Sleeping Beauty characters, I love retelling fairy tales and making them funny and your troop of characters will help a lot!
Well, there is going to be more right? This was so good, and so...vivid, is that the right word for it? Yeah, yeah vivid is good. I want to know more, what happens, eh? Oh and thanks for the Sleeping Beauty characters, I love retelling fairy tales and making them funny and your troop of characters will help a lot!
6/3/2004 c1 Majian
Very nice beginning. I could almost feel the pain. Can't wait for what comes after..
Very nice beginning. I could almost feel the pain. Can't wait for what comes after..
5/31/2004 c1 AcrosstheStars158
wow! sounds really good so far, very descriptive too...i hope to read more of it soon.
wow! sounds really good so far, very descriptive too...i hope to read more of it soon.
5/30/2004 c1 Silver Blackguard
Hey, nice one! No criticisms here. It's cool, i guess. Some parts I found a bit awkward, but okay. Hows the rest of the story going? ^_^
Hey, nice one! No criticisms here. It's cool, i guess. Some parts I found a bit awkward, but okay. Hows the rest of the story going? ^_^
5/30/2004 c1 the lunatic
Nice fic. Dark themes abound and it's only the first chapter. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story...keep writing!
Nice fic. Dark themes abound and it's only the first chapter. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story...keep writing!