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7/7/2004 c1 kewl
u no what? im working on a story about my mom's dream. dats pretty creepy...
6/19/2004 c1 12Smiley Gurl 1019
Good. I like it. You can truly picture it in your head. And I understand completely about your bio - I can't write anything unless I'm feeling a strong emotion either, and therefore I start things but never finish them. There weren't many grammar errors in this, so I don't have much to complain about. I really don't have anything to complain about. So I won't complain. Right.
6/7/2004 c1 9QuillKitten
Wow, that's pretty creepy. I'm sorry, but on this one I'm having some trouble with the visuals, it's kind of jumbled, but it's also one in the morning... Well I like it, I think that if you had applied the single effect it really would have added and seemed more clear? Well I don't think it's supposed to be overly clear, but like there is this mounting fear and rising terror. Oh, and Edgar Allen Poe used the single effect.
5/29/2004 c1 4SOX
Yeah that story is very weird. But it's not really if its based on a dream cos they're always weird! i loved the lone paragraph at the end. finishes it off with class.
sox

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