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for Old Dad

7/8/2011 c1 6chilier2
Awe this is so sad! You did a really nice job, keep it up :)
6/6/2005 c1 11nacay
12/27/2004 c1 12tablesalt
Your emotions flow through every single line you write. I don't have the experience of having such a dad, but your poem is enough! Great job, and keep on writing. -tablesalt.
7/31/2004 c1 1figmentation
All of your poetry about your dad reminds me too much of my dad. Except luckily you had that old dad.
You really managed to capture that longing that I feel so much as well. Why can't they understand?
5/29/2004 c1 5Eagle Seance
The emotion... great use of the free form.
5/29/2004 c1 26BestSkeptic
I can relate perfectly. He's an angel when things are going his way, and makes it look like that around other people, but when we're alone and he's p.o'd, then you have trouble. What happened to the dad I had when I was like... five... before these things started happening?

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