for Razor's Edge6/2/2004 c1 
41Silver Phoenix Falling
I personally don't agree that those who commit suicide aren't strong. I enjoyed reading the poem, though. I love the way you've written it. I especially like how you've added into the poem phrases that interrupt and add your thoughts on that which is going on. It reminds me of the "Shah Nama" by Firdawsi.
All in all, a beautiful poem.
41Silver Phoenix FallingI personally don't agree that those who commit suicide aren't strong. I enjoyed reading the poem, though. I love the way you've written it. I especially like how you've added into the poem phrases that interrupt and add your thoughts on that which is going on. It reminds me of the "Shah Nama" by Firdawsi.
All in all, a beautiful poem.
5/30/2004 c1 Melancholic Angel too lazy to sign in
I really liked it. Nice job. I can relate all too well.
I really liked it. Nice job. I can relate all too well.
5/30/2004 c1 11Rachel4487
Thanks for the review and yeah. I just really had to write this because I keep seeing it when I close my eyes and I'm hoping this will make it go away. And... I updated Knight of Fire, if you didn't know that already. Thanks for being so supportive of me all the time!
11Rachel4487Thanks for the review and yeah. I just really had to write this because I keep seeing it when I close my eyes and I'm hoping this will make it go away. And... I updated Knight of Fire, if you didn't know that already. Thanks for being so supportive of me all the time!
5/29/2004 c1 3talichernin
Very nice poem. Nice to know you're not planning on anything like that. I can relate, though my reasoning is far less nobel then "i'll tough it out". I'm just too scared of it. Blah.
Hope things work out.
3talicherninVery nice poem. Nice to know you're not planning on anything like that. I can relate, though my reasoning is far less nobel then "i'll tough it out". I'm just too scared of it. Blah.
Hope things work out.