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12/22/2004 c1 136Elliptical Shapes
Yeah, I know what you mean in your last little paragraph at the end, thats the jackpot! Thats the monkey.
5/31/2004 c1 ylem
Although I'm not partial to this style of poem, I have to admit I really liked this one. /And laugh toothless grins/ That made me think sort of about the whole theme of the poem, like the workers (maybe not just the workers? maybe the world?) do things without thinking, just to 'get the job done,' just finish and move on. Like they're grinning, but they don't know what about. I also love that line about the flowers that 'didn't do anything to them.' Makes me feel bad, like I want to help them...;) The last stanza really wraps it up well, I think. Again, it's like you're watching all this impulsive not-thinking from the outside, meaning that you do things for a reason. I liked that.

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