for Meadow Breeze6/23/2004 c1 
127godawful teen-angst poetry
A very haiku-ish haiku, if that makes any sense...traditional, I guess you would say? Nicely executed. Take away all the asterisks and tildes and such around it, though, it's hard to see the poetry!
~lyv
127godawful teen-angst poetryA very haiku-ish haiku, if that makes any sense...traditional, I guess you would say? Nicely executed. Take away all the asterisks and tildes and such around it, though, it's hard to see the poetry!
~lyv
6/2/2004 c1 127Eirien
Beautiful. One can picture the speaker sitting there and one can almost smell that waft of flowery scent themselves. Nicely done.
127EirienBeautiful. One can picture the speaker sitting there and one can almost smell that waft of flowery scent themselves. Nicely done.
5/31/2004 c1 Priscilla
sounds beautiful
sounds beautiful
5/31/2004 c1 71Sang Yu Nung
I LOVE haikus... That was pretty ^^, lots of good memories sitting in a meadow... XD Nice job!
71Sang Yu NungI LOVE haikus... That was pretty ^^, lots of good memories sitting in a meadow... XD Nice job!