11/1/2004 c1 9Mormon Princess 1
Angst... I love angst.. It's not much angst, but still angst. Well yeah.
Angst... I love angst.. It's not much angst, but still angst. Well yeah.
6/11/2004 c1 119AntiPleasure
should definitely start naming your pieces =P meh, who cares. Works like yours don't need a name. I like the little story this one is telling, and it would be nice if it was extended but still, a nice piece.
Jenna xx
should definitely start naming your pieces =P meh, who cares. Works like yours don't need a name. I like the little story this one is telling, and it would be nice if it was extended but still, a nice piece.
Jenna xx
6/1/2004 c1 Winter Sun
Wow!
This is a really good poem. The grammer is perfect and the poem has a lot of feel to it. I understand the character perfectly! Short and sweet, and I love it!
-Cyber_Fairy AKA Fae
Wow!
This is a really good poem. The grammer is perfect and the poem has a lot of feel to it. I understand the character perfectly! Short and sweet, and I love it!
-Cyber_Fairy AKA Fae
5/31/2004 c1 120Heather Montgomery
I don't think it's necessarily unfinished. I happen to like it the way it is, because it's just like.. a snap shot. It's very well done! The puzzle metaphor is wonderful!
I don't think it's necessarily unfinished. I happen to like it the way it is, because it's just like.. a snap shot. It's very well done! The puzzle metaphor is wonderful!