for Endgame1/5/2008 c2 Nathan
Smooth work, damned pity it was left to die by all appearances.
Smooth work, damned pity it was left to die by all appearances.
3/14/2007 c1 
13KimHua
Nice setup for the story - you've crafted a neat political system that I can only envy. :-)
Please update!
13KimHuaNice setup for the story - you've crafted a neat political system that I can only envy. :-)
Please update!
6/12/2005 c2 6averroes
Very interesting and well written. One question though - is it going to be finished?
6averroesVery interesting and well written. One question though - is it going to be finished?
4/21/2005 c2 Saint Josmane
Nice work! If you're reading this, add another sodding chapter, please!
Nice work! If you're reading this, add another sodding chapter, please!
10/9/2004 c2 14biminator
hmm. interesting chapter. I like how you constructed the politics of the assembled government. nice job. update soon.
14biminatorhmm. interesting chapter. I like how you constructed the politics of the assembled government. nice job. update soon.
10/7/2004 c2 RCS
Discriptive and gripping. Update soon. And "soon" means sometime before next year...heh heh.
Discriptive and gripping. Update soon. And "soon" means sometime before next year...heh heh.
7/8/2004 c1 Mbwun
Well, snap. Sounds like someone's about to unleash mightily. I hope you plan on continuing this; I see you haven't updated in a while.
~He Who Walks On All Fours
Well, snap. Sounds like someone's about to unleash mightily. I hope you plan on continuing this; I see you haven't updated in a while.
~He Who Walks On All Fours
6/23/2004 c1 20KyranHayyt
interesting so far, ill keep reading for sure.
(by the way, on your profile Rolnald emmerich just added "the day after tomorrow" to his list of movies"
20KyranHayytinteresting so far, ill keep reading for sure.
(by the way, on your profile Rolnald emmerich just added "the day after tomorrow" to his list of movies"
6/10/2004 c1 7CommandoCody
Hm...the same, and yet different—probably 'cause of the political dimension. I am entertained and intrigued; please continue.
7CommandoCodyHm...the same, and yet different—probably 'cause of the political dimension. I am entertained and intrigued; please continue.
6/7/2004 c1 2RCS
Good beginning to a sci-fi technothriller. How long between updates on this one? (Like I should talk about expedient updates).
2RCSGood beginning to a sci-fi technothriller. How long between updates on this one? (Like I should talk about expedient updates).
6/2/2004 c1 16Calvin Fitzgerald
Great sci-fi story and the best part was the explanation of the interplanetary politics. Very life like, very realistic. It reads like something Tom Clancy would write if he were to write a sci fi story. Is this going to be a short story or is it going to be closer to a novel? At this point it looks like it could go either way. Excellent character building as well. Keep working on this one, I want to read more.
Calvin Fitzgerald
16Calvin FitzgeraldGreat sci-fi story and the best part was the explanation of the interplanetary politics. Very life like, very realistic. It reads like something Tom Clancy would write if he were to write a sci fi story. Is this going to be a short story or is it going to be closer to a novel? At this point it looks like it could go either way. Excellent character building as well. Keep working on this one, I want to read more.
Calvin Fitzgerald
6/1/2004 c1 sieg45
Great beginning update soon please please r&r my story too http:/w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=715203
Great beginning update soon please please r&r my story too http:/w.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=715203