8/13/2004 c1 9Gurt Rude Malanos
Really Good Haiku! Liked the rhyme 2. I added a new chapter to The Great Breakout From New Covonant. Could u please read & Review. Thanks!

6/7/2004 c1 75Franken
Nice description here, kind of strange that you decided to rhyme it though... or actually, it sort of sounds like you didn't mean to, that it just sort of fell into place like that... good job though!

-Franken-

6/2/2004 c1 127Eirien
Nice. Can be seen symbolically as well, poeple can read all kinds of meanings into it. Or for instance contrast the everlasting life of a diamlond with the mutability of other parts of creation - man for instance.
Lovely little gem in itself, your poem. ;-)