for Blackwater Academy12/5/2014 c3 DarBleC
This is a great start to a beautiful story. I wanted to see more of Onyx and Elm, but oh well. It doesn't seem like this will ever be finished.
This is a great start to a beautiful story. I wanted to see more of Onyx and Elm, but oh well. It doesn't seem like this will ever be finished.
1/24/2013 c3 Guest
Ahhh why haven't you update in sooo long? I love this story, the relationships are already super intense:) It is a little confusing. . . I thought Lua was with the "puppy" but I'll figure it out:) Please write more!
Ahhh why haven't you update in sooo long? I love this story, the relationships are already super intense:) It is a little confusing. . . I thought Lua was with the "puppy" but I'll figure it out:) Please write more!
5/8/2011 c3 
6Feeshes
Ou my gash, you should post more! And bring back Shade and Blaze and... I forgot his name... I feel bad... Anyway! Those three and Elm are my favoritest! XD I'd love to help you with anything you need, if you'd like.
6FeeshesOu my gash, you should post more! And bring back Shade and Blaze and... I forgot his name... I feel bad... Anyway! Those three and Elm are my favoritest! XD I'd love to help you with anything you need, if you'd like.
4/7/2011 c3 3TheAtrophyOfDarkness
So cool. I like Shade a lot, go back to him!
This story has a lot of promise, I hope you continue it soon. There is a lot of character jumping around as you introduce people, though, but I'm sure that'll settle down once we know everyone. :D
3TheAtrophyOfDarknessSo cool. I like Shade a lot, go back to him!
This story has a lot of promise, I hope you continue it soon. There is a lot of character jumping around as you introduce people, though, but I'm sure that'll settle down once we know everyone. :D
12/15/2010 c3 1TheMadButterfly
Ooh! I am like hoping to get see a new chapter real soon! please! for christmas! ^_^ .
1TheMadButterflyOoh! I am like hoping to get see a new chapter real soon! please! for christmas! ^_^ .
12/4/2010 c3 Ladite
I hope you'll update soon. This sounds interesting and I would love to read more. Especially about Elm and Onyx... I really hope they end up together in some point of this story ;)
Keep up the good work!
xx
I hope you'll update soon. This sounds interesting and I would love to read more. Especially about Elm and Onyx... I really hope they end up together in some point of this story ;)
Keep up the good work!
xx
11/25/2010 c3 Jaded Devil
Oh very nice chapter! :) Is it wrong that I want Onyx and Elm to end up together, despite the history of drow slavery?
Oh very nice chapter! :) Is it wrong that I want Onyx and Elm to end up together, despite the history of drow slavery?
11/20/2010 c3 Rustaam
All of your characters have such unique personalities that I don't confuse them like I do in a lot of stories. I hope that you don't take four more years to update again.
All of your characters have such unique personalities that I don't confuse them like I do in a lot of stories. I hope that you don't take four more years to update again.
11/9/2010 c2 MysticLilyGarden
I meant SOON. Not son... but even if I did it would be with lots of affection. xx
I meant SOON. Not son... but even if I did it would be with lots of affection. xx
11/9/2010 c3 MysticLilyGarden
Why do I always love your angsty pairings? This story is so amazing so far. I kind of remember the other one and I can say with confidence this is so much better. I want to see LOTS more Onyx and Elm... and lots of Flint and Shade. Hope you update son. xx
Why do I always love your angsty pairings? This story is so amazing so far. I kind of remember the other one and I can say with confidence this is so much better. I want to see LOTS more Onyx and Elm... and lots of Flint and Shade. Hope you update son. xx
11/8/2010 c3 4SucculentAmbush
Hawt. I dig it. :) I want to see more interactions between races who hate each other. ;) Can't wait for more.
4SucculentAmbushHawt. I dig it. :) I want to see more interactions between races who hate each other. ;) Can't wait for more.