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7/12/2004 c2 147hiding behind amber eyes
cool i like that. let me no when u put up the next chapter!
7/12/2004 c1 hiding behind amber eyes
wow. i like that. 2 bad me n u arnt old enough 2 go 2 poetry clubs n read like that. lol great job!
6/11/2004 c2 Reaka
I like it. This is really good. I hope you update soon.
6/10/2004 c2 CW-nerd-12
Hmm... this is getting a bit more interesting. She still couldn't really get anywhere writing about nothing but suicide and angst, though.
6/4/2004 c1 sarah
holy shit... awsomeness,i had no idea! a lot of adjectives though, maybe cut back a tad. i loved the ending, and dont worry i know your not like that. love you
6/3/2004 c1 64freeyourself
wow, that was awesome, yet a bit sad
6/3/2004 c1 CW-nerd-12
Okay, nice story, but one thing I gotta tell ya: Samara'd get laughed at as a poet with poetry like that. the rhyming is aweful, and nobldy in the poetry world takes rediculously angsty cutting / suicide poems seriously. Poetry's a lot deeper thasn jsut wanting to die.

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